By Zozo
Margot’s point of view.
Seven years have passed and there are only 2 hours of sun. But
I have seen more.
Every day before we flew to Venus the sun shone on me.
None of my classmates know the feeling how the warmth and
joyfulness of the sun can fulfill you. The day of the sun’s return is a glorious
day for everyone except me. Hoping after seven years I get to see my only
friend, the other children lock me up and forget me.
I know the sun promised to show up and it did, but I, the
sun’s best friend, was in a cold dark room missing her appearance.
I really like the point of view you wrote it in and the wording is great! - Dawn-Marie
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