Tuesday, June 25, 2013

margot"s summer: a summer day by cleopatra

Margot carefully stepped out of the closet."Is the sun still out" she whispered. They all looked at her. Ana stepped up front . "No we were enjoying ourselves that we forgot about you, sorry." Margot looked at her, when the bell rang "Oh Okay" said Margot. She walked down the tunnel to her house and threw her bag on the floor when she entered. She walked up the stairs to her bedroom and sat on her bed staring out the window then began to cry. She then went to her closet and got out her  diaster  box she had just in case something happened to her parents and she need to go back to earth. She put it all in pink and blue big backpack. She also put her only toy which was a stuffed animal.She then put a blanket, a pillow,  a sleeping bag,  some extra clothes, and lots of food and water. Her parents were at work so she would have to leave them a note.Margot set out for the space station..She had to walk ninety and a half miles to get there.She stopped by the toy store to get a batrey powered wagon to go faster.She payed the man and set off.After six days she made it to the station.She gave the conductor her ticket to get on board the pod that was going to earth After 24 hours she made it to earth.She looked around and hopped on her wagon. she then made it to califorina. she found a hold lean to shed some kids had made and lived there. sometimes life was tought trying to buy food and trying not to be taken to the orphanage but she managed she lived there untill she was 19 years old. She thought about her parents and choose to send a letter telling them to come to earth.She waited 11 days and fianlly her parents came. They all bought a house and lived together for the rest of their lives.

2 comments:

  1. I absolutely adore this story/narrative. Keep up the good work Cleopatra! -Godwin Piattoni

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  2. Very creative!!! I loved it! - Dawn-Marie

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